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at peace in honeysuckle by ~katesaidhi:iconkatesaidhi:



we slept, curled
on the dark green fuzz of the ottoman
blankets draped off us like fallen curtains
my socks dangling half-off my feet

i woke to the sound of your snoring and stroked your nose
perfect-triangular, with the tip of my finger
ran it down over your lips; thin trembling jellyfish tissues

we rustled like slow-moving bonsais, flowering all around each other
©2008-2010 ~katesaidhi
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i spent all day gardening, pruning a honeysuckle bush

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:iconhectatenemesis:
sad play on words
i like the image of the sloth-like bonsais

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lex
:iconkatesaidhi:
i like to watch people when they don't know it; they look so damn vulnerable. let's go to a park and stalk people for a day? u, me 'n' a bag of potato chips?
:iconhectatenemesis:
sounds perfect. 905-434-7645
its a good thing no one actually reads anymore or i might get a call from Randy Rapist in Louisianna

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lex
:iconkatesaidhi:
shit so i shouldn't have given him your number?
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"Flowering all around each other"

This part was most powerful, the most understated.

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I can't get lost, I don't know why..
:iconshufflng:
I'm inclined to teach you a drunken lesson by just putting the number in my phone with a clever title like "Randy" so I can be confused by it and dial on one of my more inquisitive nights.

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I can't get lost, I don't know why..

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